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interlude

 

novice  adults,   as one,   separate,   stretch their legs during the interlude  

are beautiful,   unique,   uniformed,    wearing the  dress and hair styles of trend

chatting away,  are now,  our future,  I wonder if they like my new hat?

These notes added in later edits (21st Oct 2006).   The poem can be read as vertical sections indicated by commas,   for example “novice adults, are beautiful, chatting away” and “as one, unique, are now” aswell as in the normal line structure.   The other deliberate inclusion is a play on the phonoloigcal similarity of ‘are’ and ‘our’ in the last line.   With a theme on the time-based value of style,   my hat, thier clothes.

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