future composition
novice adults, as one, separate, stretch their legs during the interlude
are beautiful, unique, uniformed, wearing the dress and hair styles of trend
chatting away, are now, our future, I wonder if they like my new hat?
These notes added in later edits (21st Oct 2006). The poem can be read as vertical sections indicated by commas, for example “novice adults, are beautiful, chatting away” and “as one, unique, are now” aswell as in the normal line structure. The other deliberate inclusion is a play on the phonoloigcal similarity of ‘are’ and ‘our’ in the last line. With a theme on the time-based value of style, my hat, thier clothes.
